Hi can anyone rerview my post on esp32 s3 sense camera streaming

I find it hard to follow because of the narrow format at that hackster website. The only worst website for project documentation is probably the Hackaday site (almost every project there is missing important information).

What's the difference between your project, and this one?  https://wiki.seeedstudio.com/XIAO_ESP32S3_Micropython/

It's using the same code and hardware it seems.

yes, But they haven't documented the content in detail. which can help a novice user to deal with those device quickly. And because I have documented it with my own hand. Next time when I face similar problem, It will help me quickly figure out the solution without any hassle. 

yes, But they haven't documented the content in detail. which can help a novice user to deal with those device quickly. And because I have documented it with my own hand. Next time when I face similar problem, It will help me quickly figure out the solution without any hassle. 

It's worth explicitly crediting it, providing a link to the original project that it is based on, because it's only slightly implicit currently, because of the link to the zip file of code.

That other project might not be the original one either, since the author there has credited someone else. 

I think the project has _too_ many steps, you've got six screenshots just on obtaining the WiFi SSID and password.

wan't to make it easy for novice user. 

It's not easier, nor is it fair to the original author for them not to be mentioned at all in your write-up.

It is not easier because you've got six screenshots for a thing that could have had zero screenshots when there are zero screenshots (and zero information) regarding all the pre-requisites. The text is silent on the need to install Thonny, Python and esptool.

If you had credited the original author and provided a link to their page, then readers would have seen how to install esptool at least. 

Also it is unusual why, in your write-up, Thonny was used just to launch a command window, and then Thonny was closed. It would have been easier to just open a command window directly, in the way the original project author did.

There should also be an explanation about why and whether users can use the latest MicroPython firmware or if they have to stick to the (old) firmware in the zip file.